The only areas in which I would see room for improvement on my college's PWP is more in-depth information and variety of topics, which of course will come with time spent on designing and further improving the website. I also found many grammatical errors which simply need to be proof-read and fixed in order to clean it up and make the website blogs more professional.
Overall, I liked the way my college represented himself through his PWP. It is clear through his website title, page information, and various blogs that he is interested in the field of strength and conditioning as well as water polo, which truly sums up his personality. I hope to make my website as straight forward and clear to follow for readers, and in such a way that represents who I am while promoting what I stand for and believe in.
Thank you for reading this blog. Please check out Brian's website to get a chance to see what he has to offer, especially for those of you interested in water polo and strength training for aquatic athletes.
by, Steven Waite